Writing Task 2: Both Parents Working

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SAMPLE QUESTION: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

SAMPLE ANSWER:

Nowadays, it is common to see families where both parents go to work. There are several reasons that cause this phenomenon and one of the most prominent is due to the increasing financial needs of families. Because of this, many people believe that while the practice of both parents working is financially advantageous, this results to lack of support to their children. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this rising trend.

In today’s highly competitive world, most parents opt to work full time in order to support their families’ growing needs. This is seen by some individuals as financially rewarding, especially today when the prices of commodities are costly. Having both parents work results to increased income and therefore more resources to spend on basic needs such as food, education or healthcare. This in turn leads to a better life for the family, especially the children who are more or less guaranteed to have a comfortable and secure future. Aside from that, having more money opens up new and better opportunities for the members of the family, such as more money to pay for hobbies and other leisure activities.

On the other hand, some individuals believe that having both parents away from home does more damage than good. they argue that while financially, the family is indeed more secure, the emotional health of its members are placed in jeopardy. This is evidenced by the findings of several studies which prove that those families with both parents working are more prone to suicidal tendencies and depression. This is because children in these families are often left alone without the supervision and support of their parents. They lack the guidance of an adult-figure which causes them to feel alone, leading to thoughts of self-harm. In several cases, some children even commit suicide. In relation to this, the parents who work full time are also affected. Constant exposure to work-related stress leaves them burned out and fatigued. This causes strain in their relationships, eventually leading to divorce and other marital conflicts.

While there are obvious advantages and disadvantages of both parents working, I think that the cons outweigh the benefits. This is because I believe that while financial stability is important, money can never replace the guidance and support that parents provide for their children. Feeling loved and appreciated will always bear more weight over new gadgets and toys. As a saying goes, money cannot but happiness.

WORD COUNT: 434 words

SCORE: 7.5

 

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